Do you remember what's historic about March 26, 2010 10:42pm? Odds are, you don't but I'm here to tell you. March 26, 2010 is when I finished the first draft of my YA novel, Dream Girl. That moment had been seven years coming. Let me explain.
A friend of mine had given me a nice suede covered journal as a gift years ago which I decided would make a great writing journal. On January 30, 2003 I wrote down these notes from a bizarre dream I'd had:
A dream
A strange new male co-worker with dishwater blonde/brown hair and a squarish rugged face begins giving me stories on tape to listen to. The stories are usually quite odd.
-sisters, young girls, who for some reason have to cut their feet off...in their pretty little shoes.
The man and I go to visit their home and encounter the ghost of the sisters and their cruel father. A horribly creepy scene, but I'm not scared by it.
-go back in time to visit two brothers, young men in their 20s. Long hair in pony tail-dark, red head with shoulder length hair. We aren't afraid of each other. We picked the day dark hair suddenly goes mad and dies. Unfortunate. He's very kind. A guard comes in to inspect. I fly to the top of a tall bookcase to hide. The brother's body lays on its back on the floor, red head kneeling beside it. I close my eyes. Open them to find guard's blade inches from my face. I pinch the blade and point it away. Explain I'm not from there. Disappears. I wake.
Ok, so those are some crazy notes. But the dream was so vivid and unusual that I felt I could use it for something, someday. Flash forward to 2005. I was doing book reviews for www.myshelf.com I had requested a YA book called A Crack in the Line by Michael Lawrence because it sounded interesting. I picked the book up as soon as it arrived and read it feverishly. I loved it. When I put it down, a lightbulb came on in my brain. It basically said, "Oh my God. That dream I had, I can write it as a novel but it needs to be a YA novel! I did a little thinking as the basic outline and characters started to form in my head. I first sat down to write it on August 31, 2005. I got married September 9, 2005. I got pregnant shortly thereafter. Life came on with a vibrant vengeance and Dream Girl went mostly into hibernation again.
After my son was born, June 2009, I decided that it was now or never for Dream Girl. I wanted to be a writer. I kept telling people I was writing a book but was I really? I wanted it to be a reality. I wanted something to show for all my years of thinking and wishing and wanting. So I sat down to write as I could find time and I worked it out. I averaged 2-4 chapters a week. I gave myself the deadline of having the first draft complete by the time I went to LA for the SCBWI writer's conference in August. And, dear reader, I accomplished that goal, ahead of schedule on March 26. Whew!
But the story doesn't end there. Following writerly advice, I let the draft sit for a few months. I figured I earned the break and I could get started on revising after the conference. And yes, that's what I've been doing, slowly, ever since. If you've been following this blog for awhile, you know there have been ups and downs and that I've started and re-started the revisions. I've had breakthroughs and setbacks. Currently, I'm back to breakthroughs. This week, the pieces in my head finally clicked together. I hadn't been happy with my first draft ending and I knew I needed some major plot fixes and after months of pondering, I believe it's finally come together...again. I am just as excited about this project as I was when I woke from that vivid crazy dream in 2003. I can see potential. I can see progress. I can see myself growing and becoming what I've always wanted to be, a writer.
There is still a lot of work ahead to complete the revision process. I am still working through that as time allows. I still need my trusted critiquers to look it over after that. I'll need to consider and incorporate their suggested changes and then, maybe then, I'll be ready to tackle that all important query letter.
But that's where we are, one year after I finally completed the first phase of this crazy project. Happy Anniversary, Dream Girl. I can say, with certainty, you only get better with age.
Literary interviews and musings on the writing life by a children's and young adult writer.
Thursday, March 3, 2011
Sunday, February 13, 2011
April Lindner Interview
If you know anything about me, you know I love Jane Eyre by Charlotte Bronte. The book is haunting and beautiful and it has a big impact on the novel I'm still writing/revising right now. So, when I saw that April Lindner had written a modernization, entitled Jane
, I was intrigued. I was even more interested when I read that the character of Rochester, (Nico Rathburn in Jane) is a rock star. Might seem a bit crazy to die hard Eyre fans but I decided to give it a chance. I'm glad I did.
Lindner was meticulous about remaining true to the original, despite what Rochester as a rock star might make you think. I was particularly pleased with how she handled the relationship between Jane and St. John Rivers. I found it more satisfying in Jane than in the original.
However, no one can top the original, but the fact that Lindner so obviously loves the Bronte makes Jane an excellent read.
Lindner is currently working on doing a modernization of Wuthering Heights, which excites me to no end. Have you read Wuthering Heights? I love the story, but I feel like it's a mess to read. I have read it twice and both times were very painful. Not just because it's a horrible/wonderful story but the language, for me, is very difficult to get through. There are a lot of passages written with an accent that I just can't get through. It hurts yet I want to love it. Heathcliff fits my ideal literary love interest, horribly flawed, somewhat dangerous but consumed by love for his woman. (see the Phantom of the Opera, Rochester, and Edward from Twilight as a few examples of the kind of crazy lovers I like to see in books).
I greatly admire April Lindner for tackling this modernization project. I think it's wonderful. In a way, I wish I'd done it myself. (longtime friends will know that I did do a rewrite of the Phantom of the Opera as my very first 'complete' novel when I was in 8th grade. I'd be tempted to resurrect it if it didn't involve so much research. However, I may have outlined a modernization of it myself to be worked on when I'm done with my current novel. Don't go stealing that idea...)
Anyway, without further sidenotes, and with great admiration for my fellow Eyre lover, I give you April Lindner.
1. Restless Writer (RW): Clearly, you love Charlotte Bronte's original Jane Eyre. Were you ever afraid of taking on a classic and making it your own?
April Lindner (AL): I probably should have been at least a little afraid. Modernizing a beloved classic like Jane Eyre is treading on sacred ground, and it would be easy to make a misstep and alienate the novel’s longtime fans. While I was doing the actual writing, though, I didn’t let myself worry about what readers would think. What I did do was try to write in good faith, to be as true as possible to the spirit of an original book, and I hoped—and still hope—that my respect and affection for Jane Eyre comes through.
2. RW: What was the most challenging aspect of writing this book?
AL: Taking plot elements in the original and finding believable contemporary equivalents was the book’s big challenge. You can’t have Jane Eyre without having a madwoman in the attic, but how could such a thing happen in our age of medical miracles? That was the biggest roadbump but there were lots of smaller ones along the way.
3. RW: A friend of mine and I were recently chatting about how Rochester is never ugly enough in film versions of Jane Eyre. If Jane was made into a movie, who would you envision as Nico and Jane?
AL: Any actors I can think of are bound to be on the too-attractive side. In my imagination, Nico looks and sounds quite a bit like Toby Stephens, the actor who played Mr. Rochester in the wonderful 2006 BBC adaptation of Jane Eyre. Nico’s in his early thirties, though, and if I had to choose among thirtyish actors, I’d choose Milo Ventimiglia, who has brooding rock star looks, or maybe James Franco, who seems versatile enough to do just about anything. As for Jane, I think Carey Mulligan could do a great job in the part. She’s got a lovely, quiet intelligence that fits the character.
4. RW: I'm a Jane Eyre addict myself. (it is heavily influencing the YA novel I'm writing) As a fellow Eyre lover, I would love to know what specific scenes in the book haunt you/stick with you the most.
AL: My favorite scene is the moment under the chestnut tree when Jane breaks down and admits her feelings for Mr. Rochester and he has to convince her that he feels the same way about her. The speech she gives him—“Do you think, because I am poor, obscure, plain, and little, I am soulless and heartless? You think wrong!”—is one of the most perfect moments in literature. And there’s the wonderfully understated declaration, “Reader, I married him.” Really, there are so many touchstone moments I couldn’t bear to leave out.
5. RW: I've read that you're working on a retelling of Wuthering Heights next. I've read the book twice and found it a slow difficult read both times. (although also compelling and worth the difficulty). I'm so happy to hear you're modernizing it. How far along are you and how does it compare to writing Jane?
AL: I’m revising, but I’ve got a long way to go. I’ve found this particular novel much more difficult to write. With Jane, I meant to stay faithful to the original, so I had a pretty clear template to follow, but Wuthering Heights has so many elements that resist translation into the 21st century, for example, first cousins marrying and Heathcliff digging up the long dead Cathy for a last look at her body. I knew I had to give myself permission to go a lot farther afield, so I did. Like the original, my retelling, Catherine, is a multigenerational story of obsessive love. The Heathcliff character is a punk rocker and Catherine is the brilliant and somewhat spoiled daughter of a legendary night club on Manhattan’s Lower East Side. It’s a darker story than Jane, but still nowhere near as dark and violent as the original.
6. RW: The writer in me wonders if Jane was an easy sell for you. How long did it take from idea to book deal?
AL: Don’t hate me, please, when I tell you that Jane was a relatively easy sell. I wrote it in the summer of 2007, revised it over the next year, found an agent, and sold it in 2009, though a lot more revision ensued after that. But Jane isn’t really my first novel; I’ve got another one languishing in a drawer, unpublished. Also it took me ten years of banging my head against a brick wall to get my first poetry collection, Skin, into print. A second poetry manuscript has been a finalist or a semi finalist in multiple contests but has yet to win the competition that is the usual way into print for a poetry book. So I’ve paid a lot of dues along the way.
7. RW: You're also a rock fan. What are the top 3 concerts you've been to?
AL: 1) My all time favorite concert would have to be almost any Bruce Springsteen show I’ve seen, and I’ve seen many. If I have to choose just one, it would be my very first, in 1980, during The River Tour. He played for almost four hours, and was a fireball of charisma and energy. He still plays longer, more intense shows than anyone else, and he’s got such a wealth of material to draw from that I’m always left wanting more.2) This summer a friend took me to see Paul McCartney. To tell the truth, I was more excited about seeing my friend than about seeing Sir Paul, but the show took my breath away. When Paul launched into the Long and Winding Road I surprised myself by bursting into tears; it was an instant flashback to my early childhood. The rockers—both Beatle era and from Wings and beyond--still sizzle, and nobody does a ballad better.3) On a whim my husband and I went to see Train at a free music festival in New Jersey, and they were fantastic. Lead singer Pat Monahan threw his whole soul into every song, and he has such a beautiful, powerful, resonant voice.
8. RW: When I write, I often listen to a specific soundtrack I've put together for my story. Do you do the same? If so, would you share some of the songs from your Jane playlist?
AL: Absolutely. The playlist’s still growing, but here it is in its current form:It Happens Every Day (Dar Williams)Bad Reputation (Freedy Johnston)American Slang (The Gaslight Anthem)Parachute (Train)The Lucky One (Alison Krauss & Union Station)My Love Will Not Let You Down (Bruce Springsteen)Romeo’s Tune (Steve Forbert)Hey, Soul Sister (Train)Don’t Dream It’s Over (Crowded House)Your Mind’s Playing Tricks on You (John Wesley Harding)Rumors (Josh Ritter)Janey Don’t You Lose Heart (Bruce Springsteen)Troubled Times (Dar Williams)Intro/Sweet Jane (Lou Reed)
9. RW: Do you have any projects in mind once Wuthering Heights is complete?
AL: I want to do another modernization, and I’ve been thinking about the possibilities of reworking E. M. Forster’s A Room With a View, to tell the story of young American backpackers in Italy. When I was 22, I backpacked solo across Europe and I’ve always wanted to work some of those experiences into a story.
10. RW: When can readers expect to see your version of Wuthering Heights hit the bookstores?
AL: Fall of 2012 is the projected date. It seems so far away, but also, considering how much revising I still need to do, terrifyingly close.
11. RW: You're also an award winning poet. Did you always have an inkling that you'd write for the YA audience? Are you still writing poetry?
AL: I always thought I would write a novel some day, and I knew it would probably be about young adults, because I’m fascinated with that time of life, the point at which people really start to grow into the adults they’ll become. But it didn’t occur to me that I was writing for a YA audience until my agent, Amy Williams, wisely pointed out the possibility. Now that I’ve fallen into the YA world, it feels like home. There’s so much enthusiasm among YA book bloggers and readers. There’s a sense among academics that high school and college students just aren’t reading for pleasure anymore, but now I know that there’s a hard core of passionate young readers hungry for more.As for my poetry, it comes from a different part of my psyche—a more personal place. I still write poetry, albeit maybe a bit less of it these days, and I don’t plan to stop.
Lindner was meticulous about remaining true to the original, despite what Rochester as a rock star might make you think. I was particularly pleased with how she handled the relationship between Jane and St. John Rivers. I found it more satisfying in Jane than in the original.
However, no one can top the original, but the fact that Lindner so obviously loves the Bronte makes Jane an excellent read.
Lindner is currently working on doing a modernization of Wuthering Heights, which excites me to no end. Have you read Wuthering Heights? I love the story, but I feel like it's a mess to read. I have read it twice and both times were very painful. Not just because it's a horrible/wonderful story but the language, for me, is very difficult to get through. There are a lot of passages written with an accent that I just can't get through. It hurts yet I want to love it. Heathcliff fits my ideal literary love interest, horribly flawed, somewhat dangerous but consumed by love for his woman. (see the Phantom of the Opera, Rochester, and Edward from Twilight as a few examples of the kind of crazy lovers I like to see in books).
I greatly admire April Lindner for tackling this modernization project. I think it's wonderful. In a way, I wish I'd done it myself. (longtime friends will know that I did do a rewrite of the Phantom of the Opera as my very first 'complete' novel when I was in 8th grade. I'd be tempted to resurrect it if it didn't involve so much research. However, I may have outlined a modernization of it myself to be worked on when I'm done with my current novel. Don't go stealing that idea...)
Anyway, without further sidenotes, and with great admiration for my fellow Eyre lover, I give you April Lindner.
1. Restless Writer (RW): Clearly, you love Charlotte Bronte's original Jane Eyre. Were you ever afraid of taking on a classic and making it your own?
April Lindner (AL): I probably should have been at least a little afraid. Modernizing a beloved classic like Jane Eyre is treading on sacred ground, and it would be easy to make a misstep and alienate the novel’s longtime fans. While I was doing the actual writing, though, I didn’t let myself worry about what readers would think. What I did do was try to write in good faith, to be as true as possible to the spirit of an original book, and I hoped—and still hope—that my respect and affection for Jane Eyre comes through.
2. RW: What was the most challenging aspect of writing this book?
AL: Taking plot elements in the original and finding believable contemporary equivalents was the book’s big challenge. You can’t have Jane Eyre without having a madwoman in the attic, but how could such a thing happen in our age of medical miracles? That was the biggest roadbump but there were lots of smaller ones along the way.
3. RW: A friend of mine and I were recently chatting about how Rochester is never ugly enough in film versions of Jane Eyre. If Jane was made into a movie, who would you envision as Nico and Jane?
AL: Any actors I can think of are bound to be on the too-attractive side. In my imagination, Nico looks and sounds quite a bit like Toby Stephens, the actor who played Mr. Rochester in the wonderful 2006 BBC adaptation of Jane Eyre. Nico’s in his early thirties, though, and if I had to choose among thirtyish actors, I’d choose Milo Ventimiglia, who has brooding rock star looks, or maybe James Franco, who seems versatile enough to do just about anything. As for Jane, I think Carey Mulligan could do a great job in the part. She’s got a lovely, quiet intelligence that fits the character.
4. RW: I'm a Jane Eyre addict myself. (it is heavily influencing the YA novel I'm writing) As a fellow Eyre lover, I would love to know what specific scenes in the book haunt you/stick with you the most.
AL: My favorite scene is the moment under the chestnut tree when Jane breaks down and admits her feelings for Mr. Rochester and he has to convince her that he feels the same way about her. The speech she gives him—“Do you think, because I am poor, obscure, plain, and little, I am soulless and heartless? You think wrong!”—is one of the most perfect moments in literature. And there’s the wonderfully understated declaration, “Reader, I married him.” Really, there are so many touchstone moments I couldn’t bear to leave out.
5. RW: I've read that you're working on a retelling of Wuthering Heights next. I've read the book twice and found it a slow difficult read both times. (although also compelling and worth the difficulty). I'm so happy to hear you're modernizing it. How far along are you and how does it compare to writing Jane?
AL: I’m revising, but I’ve got a long way to go. I’ve found this particular novel much more difficult to write. With Jane, I meant to stay faithful to the original, so I had a pretty clear template to follow, but Wuthering Heights has so many elements that resist translation into the 21st century, for example, first cousins marrying and Heathcliff digging up the long dead Cathy for a last look at her body. I knew I had to give myself permission to go a lot farther afield, so I did. Like the original, my retelling, Catherine, is a multigenerational story of obsessive love. The Heathcliff character is a punk rocker and Catherine is the brilliant and somewhat spoiled daughter of a legendary night club on Manhattan’s Lower East Side. It’s a darker story than Jane, but still nowhere near as dark and violent as the original.
6. RW: The writer in me wonders if Jane was an easy sell for you. How long did it take from idea to book deal?
AL: Don’t hate me, please, when I tell you that Jane was a relatively easy sell. I wrote it in the summer of 2007, revised it over the next year, found an agent, and sold it in 2009, though a lot more revision ensued after that. But Jane isn’t really my first novel; I’ve got another one languishing in a drawer, unpublished. Also it took me ten years of banging my head against a brick wall to get my first poetry collection, Skin, into print. A second poetry manuscript has been a finalist or a semi finalist in multiple contests but has yet to win the competition that is the usual way into print for a poetry book. So I’ve paid a lot of dues along the way.
7. RW: You're also a rock fan. What are the top 3 concerts you've been to?
AL: 1) My all time favorite concert would have to be almost any Bruce Springsteen show I’ve seen, and I’ve seen many. If I have to choose just one, it would be my very first, in 1980, during The River Tour. He played for almost four hours, and was a fireball of charisma and energy. He still plays longer, more intense shows than anyone else, and he’s got such a wealth of material to draw from that I’m always left wanting more.2) This summer a friend took me to see Paul McCartney. To tell the truth, I was more excited about seeing my friend than about seeing Sir Paul, but the show took my breath away. When Paul launched into the Long and Winding Road I surprised myself by bursting into tears; it was an instant flashback to my early childhood. The rockers—both Beatle era and from Wings and beyond--still sizzle, and nobody does a ballad better.3) On a whim my husband and I went to see Train at a free music festival in New Jersey, and they were fantastic. Lead singer Pat Monahan threw his whole soul into every song, and he has such a beautiful, powerful, resonant voice.
8. RW: When I write, I often listen to a specific soundtrack I've put together for my story. Do you do the same? If so, would you share some of the songs from your Jane playlist?
AL: Absolutely. The playlist’s still growing, but here it is in its current form:It Happens Every Day (Dar Williams)Bad Reputation (Freedy Johnston)American Slang (The Gaslight Anthem)Parachute (Train)The Lucky One (Alison Krauss & Union Station)My Love Will Not Let You Down (Bruce Springsteen)Romeo’s Tune (Steve Forbert)Hey, Soul Sister (Train)Don’t Dream It’s Over (Crowded House)Your Mind’s Playing Tricks on You (John Wesley Harding)Rumors (Josh Ritter)Janey Don’t You Lose Heart (Bruce Springsteen)Troubled Times (Dar Williams)Intro/Sweet Jane (Lou Reed)
9. RW: Do you have any projects in mind once Wuthering Heights is complete?
AL: I want to do another modernization, and I’ve been thinking about the possibilities of reworking E. M. Forster’s A Room With a View, to tell the story of young American backpackers in Italy. When I was 22, I backpacked solo across Europe and I’ve always wanted to work some of those experiences into a story.
10. RW: When can readers expect to see your version of Wuthering Heights hit the bookstores?
AL: Fall of 2012 is the projected date. It seems so far away, but also, considering how much revising I still need to do, terrifyingly close.
11. RW: You're also an award winning poet. Did you always have an inkling that you'd write for the YA audience? Are you still writing poetry?
AL: I always thought I would write a novel some day, and I knew it would probably be about young adults, because I’m fascinated with that time of life, the point at which people really start to grow into the adults they’ll become. But it didn’t occur to me that I was writing for a YA audience until my agent, Amy Williams, wisely pointed out the possibility. Now that I’ve fallen into the YA world, it feels like home. There’s so much enthusiasm among YA book bloggers and readers. There’s a sense among academics that high school and college students just aren’t reading for pleasure anymore, but now I know that there’s a hard core of passionate young readers hungry for more.As for my poetry, it comes from a different part of my psyche—a more personal place. I still write poetry, albeit maybe a bit less of it these days, and I don’t plan to stop.
Wednesday, January 19, 2011
Tammi Sauer interview
I first discovered Tammi Sauer's work when I was working as a children's librarian. I was browsing our new book shelf for something to bring home for my daughter and the cover of Chicken Dance caught my eye. Having been an Elvis fan for as long as I can remember, I picked it up, checked it out and brought it home. It was, in short, hilarious fun.
Fast forward to SCBWI annual last year. It was the last day of the conference. I was sitting in the last row and who should sneak in next to me but Tammi Sauer and Cynthea Liu. Tammi and I exchanged business cards and I was delighted to exclaim, "Oh YOU wrote Chicken Dance! My daughter and I LOVE that book!"
This led to the all important Facebook friendship, and as a result, you get to read my interview with her. If you want something fun to read with your children, Tammi Sauer is the author for you. If you want to read some picture books to examine style, humor and get inspired to perfect your own writing, Tammi Sauer is the author for you!
Thank you so much for agreeing to the interview, Tammi. Can't wait to read your upcoming books!
Restless Writer (RW): My daughter and I thoroughly enjoyed Chicken Dance. I’ve always loved Elvis. So the question is, how did you pair together poultry and Elvis? (It’s a brilliantly fun pairing!)
Fast forward to SCBWI annual last year. It was the last day of the conference. I was sitting in the last row and who should sneak in next to me but Tammi Sauer and Cynthea Liu. Tammi and I exchanged business cards and I was delighted to exclaim, "Oh YOU wrote Chicken Dance! My daughter and I LOVE that book!"
This led to the all important Facebook friendship, and as a result, you get to read my interview with her. If you want something fun to read with your children, Tammi Sauer is the author for you. If you want to read some picture books to examine style, humor and get inspired to perfect your own writing, Tammi Sauer is the author for you!
Thank you so much for agreeing to the interview, Tammi. Can't wait to read your upcoming books!
Restless Writer (RW): My daughter and I thoroughly enjoyed Chicken Dance. I’ve always loved Elvis. So the question is, how did you pair together poultry and Elvis? (It’s a brilliantly fun pairing!)
Tammi Sauer (TS): When I first started working on Chicken Dance, I knew there would be a barnyard talent show, and I knew the grand prize had to be big. That prize couldn’t be a bucket of oats. It couldn’t be a hay bale. It had to be amazing and different and fresh. I was sitting around thinking chicken when two words popped into my head: Elvis Poultry. And I knew I had my grand prize: Tickets to Elvis Poultry in Concert: The Final Doodle-Doo.
RW: How did you choose the name ‘Bernadette’ for your little monster in Mostly Monsterly ?
TS: My mom comes from a huge family. Seven boys: Lawrence, Sylvester, Sonny, Al, Robert, George and Frank. Seven girls: Rosalia, Ramona, Loretta, Caecilia, Vivian, Gladys, and Bernadine. While these names are perfectly lovely, I always thought they sounded like a great cast of characters for a monster school. When I came up with the idea for Mostly Monsterly, I didn’t even have to think about what the main character’s name should be. I tweaked Bernadine’s name and had the perfect fit for my big-hearted, little monster.
RW: What are some picture books that make you laugh the hardest? (in a good way)
TS: Oh, there are so many! Some of the books that have made me laugh out loud are Ugly Fish by Kara LaReau, illustrated by Scott Magoon, What Will Fat Cat Sit On? written and illustrated by Jan Thomas, and Falling for Rapunzel by Leah Wilcox, illustrated by Lydia Monks.
RW: Wannabe writers, like myself, hear over and over again that picture books are the hardest area of children’s publishing to break into. How did you manage to do it?
TS: I kept reading, writing, revising, and researching. I never gave up, and I never stopped believing. I didn’t sell my first story. Or my second story. Or my third. But those stories helped me to be a better writer. The more I wrote, the better I wrote. I tell kids that writing is just like playing a sport or an instrument. You get better with practice.
RW: The ‘average’ person often seems to think writing picture books must be easy. How long does it take you to complete a manuscript? How many rounds of revisions do you typically go through?
TS: The hardest part for me is coming up with a great idea. That can take months and months. Once I have that idea, it generally takes a month or two for me to complete a solid manuscript. I then get feedback on the manuscript from my critique partners and from a number of other picture book writers. These days, I usually go through ten rounds of revision. Some of those revisions might just involve a few word changes, but with picture books, every word must be the right word.
RW: Many people don’t realize that picture book writers don't choose their illustrators or have a lot of input into the illustrations of their books. Tell us the truth, how do you really feel when you’re holding your yet unseen artwork for your precious characters?
TS: I feel nervous/excited/hopeful, but I always trust that my publishers will find the perfect match for each book. Getting those emails with art attachments is one of my favorite parts of the business.
RW: Can you give us any hints on your upcoming projects?
TS: I am super excited about the soon-to-be-released Mr. Duck Means Business
. Mr. Duck loves his solitary life on his pond. One day he goes a little haywire when the barnyard animals mistakenly think they’ve been invited for a swim. Following that is Bawk and Roll, the sequel to Chicken Dance. In 2012, I have Princess-in-Training, Oh, Nuts, and Me Want Pet. Princesses, chipmunks and a Cave Boy? I can’t wait!
RW: What is one of the coolest things you’ve been able to experience because of your writing?
TS: I love hearing from kids. This is my all time favorite letter:
Dear Mrs. Sauer:
Your [sic] the best. Your [sic] my hero and roll [sic] model. My dream is to right [sic] a book. Do not tell her this but I like you more than Kelly Clarkson.
Love,
Elizabeth
Saturday, January 1, 2011
2011 is the year of Awesome
This is the level of awesome I'm talking about. Partying with NYT bestselling authors in drag on the West Coast awesome! |
Tuesday, December 28, 2010
We've come a long way, baby
Around this time last year, I started dreaming about how awesome it would be to attend the SCBWI annual conference. At first, I never expected it to come close to reality. Why on earth would I travel across the country, alone, leaving my husband and two young children for almost a week just so I could indulge in a big conference, which would undoubtedly be at least as much fun as it was informative? Well, you all know how that turned out.
I don't know if it's just this time of year or what, but the dream has returned. I want to go back to that conference. I want to go badly. The hubby is on board so it's time to start planning and saving up the $$$.
In the meantime, you may also recall that I was brilliantly happy with my writing strides in 2010. I completed a full draft of my YA novel, which had started as a bizarre dream all the way back in 2001. I attended a regional SCBWI conference that assigned NYT bestseller, Jay Asher, to critique the first chapter of my novel. His feedback was amazing. He encouraged me. He made me feel that my work really does have merit and that I need to pursue it. I attended the SCBWI annual conference. I met unpublished authors who I'm working with to perfect our craft and break into this crazy business of kidlit. I met wildly successful published authors who were also very encouraging and kind. I met my critique partner. I learned that I'm totally capable of traveling all by myself. I learned a lot about my novel and the work it will take to get it from that completed draft to a version that I can show an agent or editor with pride and confidence.
I entered my picture book manuscript in a contest for MeeGenius. The results are yet to be announced. (sigh) But I'm still holding out hope that I could be the winner, and if not, that I will get a small ebook deal with them out of it and be actually making some money for my writing.
I have been grappling with the revision of DREAM GIRL. It's a hard row to hoe, let me tell you. I thought it was a struggle to get the first draft out, I will tell you with confidence that it's harder to make that draft into something engaging, intelligent, suspenseful, polished, compelling and coherent. Thus, after many attempts to get through a revision of the entire draft (which I have not done,) I have come back to a title recommended by editor Ruta Rimas at that same regional SCBWI conference where I met Jay Asher. The book is WRITING THE BREAKOUT NOVEL WORKBOOK by Donald Maass. I had checked the book out from the library after that conference, but I wasn't ready for it. I was riding high from completing the first draft. I just knew it was brilliant as is. (if you're a writer, you know that feeling, let's take a moment to laugh about it now.......ha.....ha.....ha....ok, let's continue.) So, zoom forward to tonight, I bought that book 5 days ago from Amazon. It arrived on my porch this morning. (pretty impressive since Christmas has occurred in between purchasing and receiving). We got the kids to bed by 8 tonight and I did the exercises in the first two chapters. This involved answering 8 questions/ doing some brainstorming and I stopped after those 2 chapters because it's draining but incredible work! I think I'm already on track for a heck of a lot better book just from those 8 questions alone. And let me tell you, there are 34 chapters!
Working through this workbook, which I highly recommend for any of you out there who want to write better novels, is helping me to polish this manuscript better than I could myself. I wouldn't know about this book if it wasn't for that regional conference.
Besides that, all of my current revision work is reminding me of the talks I attended by Rachel Vail
on character development at the SCBWI annual conference. I didn't want to admit it at the time but I didn't know everything there was to know about my character. In fact, here's a dirty secret, I hadn't spent much time thinking about her before I threw her into my story, let alone the other characters. So now, I'm putting in the hard work, or starting to. These conferences I've attended, these connections I've made to the writing world, have helped me tremendously, even if it takes me a few months to process it and apply it to my project.
So, in closing, I suppose my point is that even though this is really hard work and the conferences are a lot of fun, they are so valuable to this dream I have of publishing books. This past year has been my most successful as a writer even though I have not even advanced to sending out queries yet. The devil is in the details, and right now, I'm striving to make the details of this novel as good as I can so I can fashion a product that will make myself and my potential readers proud.
I can only imagine what 2011 will have in store, but if I can continue reaching and growing even slowly, it's going to be another amazing year. Thanks for being part of this journey.
I don't know if it's just this time of year or what, but the dream has returned. I want to go back to that conference. I want to go badly. The hubby is on board so it's time to start planning and saving up the $$$.
In the meantime, you may also recall that I was brilliantly happy with my writing strides in 2010. I completed a full draft of my YA novel, which had started as a bizarre dream all the way back in 2001. I attended a regional SCBWI conference that assigned NYT bestseller, Jay Asher, to critique the first chapter of my novel. His feedback was amazing. He encouraged me. He made me feel that my work really does have merit and that I need to pursue it. I attended the SCBWI annual conference. I met unpublished authors who I'm working with to perfect our craft and break into this crazy business of kidlit. I met wildly successful published authors who were also very encouraging and kind. I met my critique partner. I learned that I'm totally capable of traveling all by myself. I learned a lot about my novel and the work it will take to get it from that completed draft to a version that I can show an agent or editor with pride and confidence.
I entered my picture book manuscript in a contest for MeeGenius. The results are yet to be announced. (sigh) But I'm still holding out hope that I could be the winner, and if not, that I will get a small ebook deal with them out of it and be actually making some money for my writing.
I have been grappling with the revision of DREAM GIRL. It's a hard row to hoe, let me tell you. I thought it was a struggle to get the first draft out, I will tell you with confidence that it's harder to make that draft into something engaging, intelligent, suspenseful, polished, compelling and coherent. Thus, after many attempts to get through a revision of the entire draft (which I have not done,) I have come back to a title recommended by editor Ruta Rimas at that same regional SCBWI conference where I met Jay Asher. The book is WRITING THE BREAKOUT NOVEL WORKBOOK by Donald Maass. I had checked the book out from the library after that conference, but I wasn't ready for it. I was riding high from completing the first draft. I just knew it was brilliant as is. (if you're a writer, you know that feeling, let's take a moment to laugh about it now.......ha.....ha.....ha....ok, let's continue.) So, zoom forward to tonight, I bought that book 5 days ago from Amazon. It arrived on my porch this morning. (pretty impressive since Christmas has occurred in between purchasing and receiving). We got the kids to bed by 8 tonight and I did the exercises in the first two chapters. This involved answering 8 questions/ doing some brainstorming and I stopped after those 2 chapters because it's draining but incredible work! I think I'm already on track for a heck of a lot better book just from those 8 questions alone. And let me tell you, there are 34 chapters!
Working through this workbook, which I highly recommend for any of you out there who want to write better novels, is helping me to polish this manuscript better than I could myself. I wouldn't know about this book if it wasn't for that regional conference.
Besides that, all of my current revision work is reminding me of the talks I attended by Rachel Vail
So, in closing, I suppose my point is that even though this is really hard work and the conferences are a lot of fun, they are so valuable to this dream I have of publishing books. This past year has been my most successful as a writer even though I have not even advanced to sending out queries yet. The devil is in the details, and right now, I'm striving to make the details of this novel as good as I can so I can fashion a product that will make myself and my potential readers proud.
I can only imagine what 2011 will have in store, but if I can continue reaching and growing even slowly, it's going to be another amazing year. Thanks for being part of this journey.
Thursday, November 4, 2010
Christy Raedeke Interview
I told you it was coming and here it is! Christy Raedeke is another author I admire. Thanks to the wonders of Facebook, she's also my 'friend'. Let me tell you, not only is she a talented writer, but she's really nice too.
I couldn't wait to read her young adult novel, PROPHECY OF DAYS. It was another book that I desperately wanted to finish in one sitting but couldn't because it was after midnight and I have small children. Having never been a morning person, I highly value sleep. So I stayed up too late two nights in a row to finish this book. "Wow" is about the first thing that came to mind after reading it. There are so many fascinating characters, many who aren't what they seem to be. It's set in Scotland, what's not to love about that? There's a hot Scottish guy for the protagonist to fall for. Yummy. There's conspiracy...good, good. There's the intrigue of the ancient Mayan calender and the year 2012...exciting and intelligent. And thrown into the mix, for good measure, is hope. After reading this book, I felt like I could make a difference and that there is still a reason to have faith in humanity. (After the recent elections that have left many feeling hopeless and without any faith in humanity...I highly recommend picking up this book.) It was fast paced, exciting, intelligent and fun. Book 2 is due in May 2011. I can't wait!
So, without further ado, Christy Raedeke!
RW (Restless Writer): I truly believe Mr. Papers is one of the greatest literary characters of all time. How did you come up with the idea for an origami folding monkey and name him Mr. Papers? It's brilliant!
I couldn't wait to read her young adult novel, PROPHECY OF DAYS. It was another book that I desperately wanted to finish in one sitting but couldn't because it was after midnight and I have small children. Having never been a morning person, I highly value sleep. So I stayed up too late two nights in a row to finish this book. "Wow" is about the first thing that came to mind after reading it. There are so many fascinating characters, many who aren't what they seem to be. It's set in Scotland, what's not to love about that? There's a hot Scottish guy for the protagonist to fall for. Yummy. There's conspiracy...good, good. There's the intrigue of the ancient Mayan calender and the year 2012...exciting and intelligent. And thrown into the mix, for good measure, is hope. After reading this book, I felt like I could make a difference and that there is still a reason to have faith in humanity. (After the recent elections that have left many feeling hopeless and without any faith in humanity...I highly recommend picking up this book.) It was fast paced, exciting, intelligent and fun. Book 2 is due in May 2011. I can't wait!
So, without further ado, Christy Raedeke!
RW (Restless Writer): I truly believe Mr. Papers is one of the greatest literary characters of all time. How did you come up with the idea for an origami folding monkey and name him Mr. Papers? It's brilliant!
CR (Christy Raedeke): First of all, I have to tell you that I printed this out, cut out the part about Mr. Papers being one of the greatest literary characters, and taped it to the top of my monitor so I can look at it all the time. For a librarian and writer to say that means so much to me!
I have always thought it would be amazing to have a helper monkey - the origami part was folly at first and then it made some sense! I wanted an animal that could communicate and with what Capuchins are trained to do, Origami is not that far out of the realm of possibility.
RW: PROPHECY OF DAYS draws heavily on the ancient Mayan calendar. Your characters speak of it very intelligently. Had you previously studied the Mayan calendar or did you just start researching it for this book?
RW: PROPHECY OF DAYS draws heavily on the ancient Mayan calendar. Your characters speak of it very intelligently. Had you previously studied the Mayan calendar or did you just start researching it for this book?
CR: I read about the Mayan calendar back in 1999 and was instantly enchanted by it. The knowledge the Maya had about astronomy and math was unbelievable! The more I looked into it, the more captivated I was by it. The book took a lot of research but since I am so interested in the subject it was fun, not work.
RW: For an adventure story of this magnitude, you could have chosen anywhere in the world for the setting. What made you chose to set it in Scotland?
CR: Because I love Scotland! It just feels so old, so softened by time and weather. Also I wanted the setting to be very far culturally and physically from the Mayalands and Scotland fit that bill.
RW: You have traveled extensively. Have you visited all the places mentioned in the book?
CR: I have been to many of the places that I use in both the two books, and a couple still remain dream trips I hope to take (like the Dunhuang Caves in China). Travel is my absolute favorite thing, so even writing about travel is fun.
RW: Your book packs adventure, travel, conspiracy, romance and ancient wisdom into one fast-paced and enjoyable package. You make it seem easy. How long did it take to write and how much research did you have to do?
RW: Your book packs adventure, travel, conspiracy, romance and ancient wisdom into one fast-paced and enjoyable package. You make it seem easy. How long did it take to write and how much research did you have to do?
CR: I can’t believe it seems easy! What a great compliment. No, the book took a few years, but I also had a very young child when I started and had another child a year into writing it, so time I could spend writing was spotty. The most enjoyable and yet most time consuming part was the research. But like I said, when it’s a subject you love it doesn’t feel like work, it feels like following a super interesting trail you’ve never been on.
RW: Your book is the first in a trilogy. How did you approach agents/publishers as a debut author with a proposed trilogy? The book is incredible but did you encounter any resistance from the industry?
RW: Your book is the first in a trilogy. How did you approach agents/publishers as a debut author with a proposed trilogy? The book is incredible but did you encounter any resistance from the industry?
CR: It’s actually just a two-book series, a “Duology”. My agent signed me after reading the first one and a one-page synopsis of the second one. We talked about breaking it into three books but right about that time the market really changed and all of a sudden publishers felt like it was a risk to take on a series – they wanted books that could stand alone but had series potential – so we scaled it back to two books. My book deal was based on a finished manuscript and a three-page synopsis of book two.
In terms of resistance, I did get some at first. When it first went out on sub, many of the New York editors had not heard of the Mayan Calendar or 2012 (this was 2008). Then last year at a writer’s conference one of the editors who gently passed on it made an open plea for anyone who had a 2012 book to please send it to her!
RW: Unlike the more mainstream perceptions of 2012, which focuses on destruction, your book offers hope. Did you make the decision to inject the story with hope or did you find evidence for a less destructive interpretation in your research. (doomsday vs. a new beginning)
CR: In all of my research I never came across one piece of information that said the world was ending, or that said what was coming was cataclysmic. It’s all about transformation, about the end of an era and the beginning of another.
I really detest fear mongering, and that’s what most of the media focuses on so naturally they’d twist this into an apocalyptic thing. Everyone is always looking for the next apocalypse!
RW: On your website, you list an app. for the Mayan Calendar. Do you, like Caity, use the Mayan calendar in your daily life? Have you found that readers are using it now?
CR: I use it all the time. There’s a great iPhone app called Tzolkin Explorer that’s easy and fun to use. It’s very helpful in setting an intention for the day and looking at each day as a unique and special piece of a never-ending spiral, not just another day on a linear yard stick.
RW: What do you hope teens will take away from your books?
RW: What do you hope teens will take away from your books?
CR: I really hope they get inspired by the adventure, the mystery, and the travel. There is so much wonder in this world, so many things to see and ways to live. I’d like teens to get a sense that they can change the world – never before have so many people under 20 been on the planet at once. They have the numbers, now they just need to get organized! Change the paradigm, please!
RW: Do you have any favorite books that you keep coming back to?
As a kid I liked to re-read books (obsessions included Herman Hesse’s Demian, Ayn Rand’s The Fountainhead, and Steinbeck’s East of Eden) but as an adult there are very few I enjoy re-reading. I am currently in love with Meg Rosoff’s What I Was (I actually adore all her books, but this one really got me) and Jennifer Eagan’s The Keep.
RW: Book 2 is coming out in May 2011 (YAY!) have you completed writing it? Can you give us a teaser?
CR: I’ve done the majority of the work on it, and have been through one round of revisions. I still have some more to do, but at least it’s close I actually like it better than Book One, which is surprising since it was so much more difficult to write.
In Book Two you get to see more of Mr. Papers, including some previously hidden ninja skills! The stakes are higher, Justine is with Caity the whole time, and some very interesting places are involved. Let me pull out a little teaser (this is from page 173):
Silently, we walk back down the way we came up and then over a small bridge from El Palacio to a group of three temples that face each other. I was drawn to the smaller one today, the Temple of the Foliated Cross, because it was tiny and wonky and a little overgrown with weeds. But it’s the more spectacular one across from it that we climb.
In the back corner of one of the chambers at the top there’s a small chink in the rock. I cannot bring myself to sick my finger in it, so I use the end of one of the long candles I bought in the gift shop. When Justine sees it crumble, she pushes me away. “I’ll do it,” she says, sticking two fingers down in the dark hole. After feeling around for longer than I ever would, she manages to move something. One of the thick stone panels that I thought was a wall, rotates just enough to reveal a very skinny, very dark staircase.
“Mr. Papers?” I say, handing him a flashlight. “Would you?”
He looks at me and rolls his eyes. Instead of taking the cheap tourist flashlight I was offering, he reaches for my big metal flashlight and shines it down. No snakes, no critters—so far so good.
Since Justine bravely stuck her fingers in the hole, and Papers is going first, I suck it up and follow. I have to turn sideways to even fit, and once I get a few feet down I can no longer see my feet because the staircase is so narrow and steep. I just feel for each step. Justine has her hand on my shoulder and is feeling her way behind me. After about twenty stairs, we reach the ground. We are under the Templo del Sol, the Temple of the Sun.
The space widens just a bit, enough for Justine and me to walk side by side. I had memorized the map and know we have to follow this tunnel almost the whole distance of the base of the pyramid to reach the hidden room.
Neither of us is talking, we’re both just breathing heavily and walking as quickly as we can. The farther we get, the more panicked I’m feeling about getting stuck down here. Just as I fear I might start hyperventilating, the tunnel turns. Right after the turn is a stone door. Mr. Papers gives it a push and it rotates open, this time to reveal another door covered in silver and decorated with glyphs.
I pull on the handle, shocked to find the room behind it already glowing with light.
Great cover art. It even looks thrilling, doesn't it?
Wednesday, October 27, 2010
Writing and not writing, that's life.
Well, I've put up two author interviews here this month. From the overwhelming lack of comments, I don't know if you're impressed or ho-humming. I prefer to think you're stunned speechless because Susan and Michael are pretty awesome. Feel free to comment and let me know what you think of them too. Up next will be Christy Raedeke, who is another wildly awesome author. She has written a book called THE PROPHECY OF DAYS
which I'll tell you more about when the interview goes up.
In the meantime, I thought it would be nice to shine the spotlight back on myself. Not because I'm that vain but because there are some things happening that are of note.
1. Sean Ingvard Ashby, my utterly talented illustrator has completed his work on PAJAMA GIRL. All that's left is to submit the manuscript to Meegenius.com and wait a couple months to see how we fare in the contest. Regardless, it was a fantastic experience to collaborate with Sean and to actually 'see' how my little Pajama Girl looks through someone else's mind. She looks incredible and Sean was a joy to work with, so if you're looking for an illustrator and you dig his style, hire him. Don't delay. He's crazy talented and fun too. Hooray for Sean!
2. DREAM GIRL is currently kicking my ass. If I gave birth to this manuscript in March, then she's turned into a snotty teenager now and will not cooperate. Chapter 18 refuses to be written properly, thus effectively putting revisions in a firm standstill. Well, sort of. Convinced that I did not lay the groundwork properly in chapters 1-17, I've gone back to the beginning, again, to sort out what the problem is. I'm back up to ch. 8. So far, so good...if I say so myself. So the problem must be between 9-17. However, the kids and I are sick with a hideous virus, my poor daughter the worst of the lot, and frankly, I don't want to revise right now. I really want to be querying, but one step at a time. And the author interviews are a whole lot of fun too. (Hint, if anyone needs to hire an interviewer, I'd love to do it!)
Well, I guess that's all the news there is for now. Please let me know if you're enjoying the interviews. I certainly am!
In the meantime, I thought it would be nice to shine the spotlight back on myself. Not because I'm that vain but because there are some things happening that are of note.
1. Sean Ingvard Ashby, my utterly talented illustrator has completed his work on PAJAMA GIRL. All that's left is to submit the manuscript to Meegenius.com and wait a couple months to see how we fare in the contest. Regardless, it was a fantastic experience to collaborate with Sean and to actually 'see' how my little Pajama Girl looks through someone else's mind. She looks incredible and Sean was a joy to work with, so if you're looking for an illustrator and you dig his style, hire him. Don't delay. He's crazy talented and fun too. Hooray for Sean!
2. DREAM GIRL is currently kicking my ass. If I gave birth to this manuscript in March, then she's turned into a snotty teenager now and will not cooperate. Chapter 18 refuses to be written properly, thus effectively putting revisions in a firm standstill. Well, sort of. Convinced that I did not lay the groundwork properly in chapters 1-17, I've gone back to the beginning, again, to sort out what the problem is. I'm back up to ch. 8. So far, so good...if I say so myself. So the problem must be between 9-17. However, the kids and I are sick with a hideous virus, my poor daughter the worst of the lot, and frankly, I don't want to revise right now. I really want to be querying, but one step at a time. And the author interviews are a whole lot of fun too. (Hint, if anyone needs to hire an interviewer, I'd love to do it!)
Well, I guess that's all the news there is for now. Please let me know if you're enjoying the interviews. I certainly am!
Subscribe to:
Posts (Atom)